Aloha,
This photo was shot a few feet from the ocean in Waikiki. Here is a good example of structure. The crane is building a structure according to the vision of architects. We usually don't view the world through nature's eyes, but the way we want to structure it.
Writers structure their world through "storytelling." Let's ponder this idea as we write today.
Enjoy!
Genre: eFuture Poetry
Purity of Quest
Surprise a friend then overwhelm
With aspirations to higher realm
What it means others take in jest
This serious business your purity of quest
In your mind you stand nth degree
One who says please thank you pardon me
Clarity in life paints a future that's best
One of principle purity of quest
Up ahead bright shiny city on a hill
Opportunities approach no time to stand still
Fax in your future be the all the best
One of principle purity of quest
Genre: eSweetHeart Poetry
Commitment
It's not so hard to find a side gal or guy
A cool look there in the eyes
Take first steps, quick off the ball
Sincerely summoned commitment call
Good with hands but delivers no blow
Recognizable face easy to know
Hasten to you with a chomp at the bit
Accelerate through then orally commit
A little selfish in a good kind of way
A work of art shown up every day
Run fast to restrict demeaning skit
Gentle to your face orally commit
Turn down offers of another's love
No fear of any below or above
Lights up easy likes to get lit
That special someone orally commit
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