Aloha,
This flower caught my eye because of it's color and symmetry. It was a little windy that morning, but this little guy looked happy, healthy and focused, with Waikiki Beach just in the background. Writers also need focus and symmetry in their storytelling. A good screenplay is described as a "tight little story." Let's aim at that idea today. Enjoy!
Genre: Poetry
Monday Star
Working under pressure
A nice way to dance
Driving a money car
From a place of innocence
Defenseless exposure
The lock of daily game
Whether deadly or not
Works out the pain
Never to hold back
And so needed where you are
Helplessness is no kicker
To be a Monday Star
Genre: Nouveau Hawaiian
Rainbows Forever
There are rainbows with shades of blue
Where the rain goes they chase too
Destination danger allure lone ranger
Rainbows forever find you
Not the same with you not here
Pronto charms your flame so dear
In your precious time as you turn to shine
Rainbows caress your fears
Rainbows above and beyond carry blues
Follow the rain glow as they choose
Fly float high fathom the sky
Rainbows forever find you
Known you too well to let you go now
Alive with your smile as young lives allow
Bring your blues, reds and yellows too
Rainbows forever find you
1 comment:
(Rainbows Forever) Lovely... for someone who fell in love with Hawaii. Thank you. I'll steal this when I leave.
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