Aloha,
Here is a wave shot in Turtle Bay, Hawaii. This dark blue is a nice contrast against the white water, giving the wave its sense of excitement. Writers also can use contrast to create excitement in their prose. Let's write with that in mind today. By the way, this wave is brought to you by request from Jesse in Atlanta. Enjoy!
Genre: eEarth Poetry
My Maple Syrup
Only fools stay
Where lonely cools the day
So much attention left to pay
How's the weather out that way?
It's not whether now
But when and how
December to March
Will find a plow
Winter's hummer
Simmers like summer
Take on all comers
Paint-by-numbers
Leaves will fall
So global
And so heart warming
A friend to you
Comes a trend swarming
Talking about back in the day
Smell the dew and it smells you
A new cut hay
Back in the day
What's this about a coming storm?
Is that another swarm?
Less snow more rain
Feel the pain
Giddy up the bridle
Kick that stirrup
I'm sure going to miss
My maple syrup
1 comment:
patrick thanks for the wave . thats just what i wanted . i love just sittin out in the lineup lettin the waves roll by . bea-utiful---jesse
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